Question

【题目】书面表达

人人都渴望朋友和友谊。为此，有人提出了建立，加深和保持友谊的三要素：1.诚实：建立友谊；2.慷慨大方和乐于分享：加深友谊；3.通情达理：使友谊持久。请围绕以上三点，写一篇说明文，注意：1.使用一般现在时态；2.词数100左右；3.参考词汇：understanding adj./n.通情达理的/理解；generosity n.慷慨大方。

Answer 1

【答案】

To establish a long-term friendship，we must learn three important factors：be honest，be generous and be understanding .

First, honesty is where friendship starts. Friends must trust each other. If we tell lies, our friends will find out that we aren’t reliable, which may result in losing friends. Second, generosity means sharing, aimed at helping friendship grow. But it is not involved with only money. We can share other valuable things such as studying skills and feelings, etc. Third, understanding makes our friendship last longer. If friends have quarrels , just put ourselves in our friends’ shoes, and we can understand them better, thus making up and as a result, our friendship will be stronger and stronger and last forever.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于读写任务，考生首先要根据要求详细讨论。本文的话题是建立，加深和保持友谊的三要素，属于说明文，所以使用一般现在时的时态。在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语aimed at doing sth旨在……；be involved with 与……有关；such as诸如……；put…in sb. else’s shoes把自己放在别人的位置上考虑；thus making…因此使得……；以及which may result in losing friends这个非限制性定语从句。为文章增色不少。