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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It’s been a long time before I left my hometown. I remember it was the beautiful place with an excellent environment, and people there were very kind-hearted. Last weekend, I make a call to a friend living there, but he sent me some pictures of the city by e-mail.

From the photo, I can see that great changes have been taken place there. For example, the streets have become wide, and the buildings higher. Beside, the people are dressed modern clothes. Several modern shopping malls are being built.

My hometown has changed very greatly that I can hardly believe my eyes. I hope my hometown can become better and better in the future.

【答案】1. beforesince

2. thea

3. makemade

4. butand

5. photophotos

6. 去掉been

7. widewider

8. BesideBesides

9. dressed后加in

10. veryso

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了作者通过朋友寄来的照片发现自己的家乡发生了巨大的变化,并希望自己的家乡能变得越来越好。

1.考查连词。句意:我离开家乡已经很久了。此处为固定句型“It has been+时间段+ since sb. did sth.”,表示“自从某人做某事已经多长时间了”。故before改为since

2.考查冠词。place为可数名词,此处表示泛指应用不定冠词,且beautiful为辅音音素开头的单词应用a。故the改为a

3.考查动词时态。根据上文Last weekend“上周末”可知应用一般过去时。故make改为made

4.考查连词。句意:上周末,我给一个住在那里的朋友打了个电话,他通过电子邮件给我发了一些这个城市的照片。结合上下文语境可知为承接关系,应用连词and。故but改为and

5.考查名词的数。photo为可数名词,根据上文some pictures可知,photo应用复数形式。故photo改为photos

6.考查动词语态。take place表示“发生”没有被动语态。故去掉been

7.考查比较级。句意:现在的街道更宽了,楼房更高了。本句暗含与过去比较之意,结合后面the houses higher,此处应用比较级wider,表示“更宽的”。故wide改为wider

8.考查副词。句意:此外,人们穿着现代的衣服。修饰后文整个句子表示“此外”应用副词besidesbeside表示“在旁边”。故Beside改为Besides

9.考查介词。dress为不及物动词,此处后跟宾语需要添加介词inbe dressed in表示“穿着”。故 dressed后加in

10.考查副词。句意:我的家乡变化如此之大,我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。修饰后文副词greatly应用soso...that…为固定搭配,意为“如此……以至于……”。故very改为so

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