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【题目】假如你是高二学生名叫王海。最近你发现班上部分同学每次遇到重要考试都会出现焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信给某英文报编辑反映这个问题。信的内容包括：1 焦虑症状 2建议（至少三点）

注意：1根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐字翻译

2可适当增加细节使行文连贯

3词数100左右 ，开头已给出，不计入总数

参考词汇：头晕 dizzy 食欲不振：lose one’s appetite Dear editor,

I’m Wang hai, a student of Grade 2 in senior high school. I ‘m writing to tell you some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

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【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m Wang hai, a student of Grade 2 in senior high school. I ‘m writing to tell you some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all those symptoms have terrible effects on our exam and we are all eager to get rid of them.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exam, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是高二学生名叫王海。最近你发现班上部分同学每次遇到重要考试都会出现焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信给某英文报编辑反映这个问题。信的内容包括：1 焦虑症状2建议（至少三点）写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐字翻译2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯. 3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。参考词汇：头晕 dizzy 食欲不振：lose one’s appetite 。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。时间状语从句的使用: Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam.方式状语从句的使用：They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies.并列句的使用：Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep and some will lose their appetite.连接词的使用也使文章结构清晰：First of all；Besides, Therefore。