Question

短文改错（10分）

共有十处错误，增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符∧，并在其下写上该词

删除：把多余的词用\划掉

修改：在错词下画一横线，在其下写上修改后的词

My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently, I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.

Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

Answer 1

1.go改为went

2.ours改为our

3.so删去

4.Before改为after

5.impatiently改为impatient

6.and改为but

7.were改为 was

8.fish前加a

9.minute改为minutes

10.Felt改为Feeling

【解析】

1.1】“一个星期天的上午”，说的是过去的事情，故句子用一般过去时态，把go改为went 。

2.2】形容词性物主代词修饰名词，放在名词前面，名词性物主代词不能，故把ours改为our。

3.3】As soon as 引导的是时间状语从句，这里不是并列句，故把so删去。

4.4】此处表达的是：我等了大约半小时之后，我开始变得有点不耐心。故把Before改为after。

5.5】句意：我等了大约半小时之后，我开始变得有点不耐心。此处get 是连系动词“变得”，后面用形容词作表语，故把impatiently改为impatient。

6.6】句意：我想放弃，而我父亲告诉我再等一会儿。此处表示转折，故把and改为but。

7.7】这是一个there be 句型，主语是a sudden pull ，单数形式，又是过去时态，故把were改为 was。

8.8】句意：突然拉鱼竿，一条大鱼被抓住了。在这里fish是可数名词，故在fish前加a。

9.9】这里的意思是“接下来的几分钟”，所以minute用复数形式，故把minute改为minutes。

10.10】句意：我们感到饿，我们在湖边生火，烤鱼吃。we 和feel之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词表示原因状语，故把Felt改为Feeling。

考点：考查短文改错。