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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

All students from our class go to the exhibition displaying China’s outstanding achievements in last month．As soon as we arrived，a guide gave us a introduction to the exhibition．While listen，we made some notes carefully．We felt excitedly and couldn’t wait to start the visit．We were both inspired by the various exhibits，including the models of the high-speed train．We took a lot of photo and were proud of the achievements of our country．

The next day，we decided have a class meeting to present which we had seen．Immediately we devoted ourselves to prepare the presentations．

Answer 1

【答案】1 go—went

2 in删掉

3 a—an

4 listen—listening

5 excitedly—excited

6 both—all

7 photo—photos

8 decided后加to

9 which—what

10 prepare—preparing

【解析】1.根据last month可知句子用一般过去时态，故把go—went。

2. last month在上个月，本身就有“在”的意思，故把last month前面的in去掉。

3. introduction介绍，以元音开头，前面用an表示“一”，故把a---an。

4.句意：当听的时候我们仔细地记一些笔记。此处表示主动，用现在分词作时间状语，故把listen—listening。

5.句意：我们感到兴奋。形容词做表语，故把excitedly—excited。

6.根据第一句中All students，可知把We were both---中的both—all。

7. a lot of修饰可数名词复数，故把photo—photos。

8.decide to do sth.决定做某事，故在decided后加to。

9.---- to present which we had seen．句中present是动词，意思是“介绍，呈现”，后面是一个宾语从句，从句的引导词既要起引导作用，又要在从句中做宾语，故把which---what。

10.固定搭配：devote oneself to doing sth.献身于---，故把prepare—preparing。