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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在却此处加一个篓子符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删掉：把多余的词用（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday, some of my classmates and I went to the West Lake for fun. I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish throw about by visitors. He was obviously having great difficulty collect some small items, especially cigarette butts. An idea was occurred to me. Why not help him collect rubbish? Much of their joy, all my classmates agreed and were willing help. So we work hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish. Then we parted but waved farewell to the thankful dustman. Tiredly as I was, I felt very happy. I truly believe we’ll have an harmonious society if everybody takes action. How a fine deed!

Answer 1

【答案】1. throw→thrown

2. collect→collecting

3. was 去掉

4. their→my

5. willing to help

6. work→worked

7. but→and

8. Tiredly→tired

9. an→a

10..How→What

【解析】这是一篇记叙文。本文主要讲了作者在周末和同学在西湖游玩时遇到一位年迈的清洁工正在捡游客丢的垃圾，作者决定和同学们一起帮助他，作者虽然很累，但是很开心。

第一处：考查非谓语动词。rubbish和throw之间是动宾关系，所以这里需用过去分词作定语，故需将throw改为thrown。

第二处：考查固定短语。have difficulty doing sth做某事有困难，为固定搭配，所以这里需用现在分词，故将collect改为collecting。

第三处：考查occur的用法。occur为不及物动词，所以不能接宾语，也不能用于被动语态，当表示某想法出现在某人脑中时可用sth occur to sb，因本文时态为一般过去时，所以需将was去掉。

第四处：考查人称代词。根据后文我所有的同学都愿意来帮忙可知，这里指的是我很开心，故将their改为my。

第五处：考查固定搭配。be willing to do sth乐意做某事，为固定搭配，所以需在willing后加to help。

第六处：考查时态。本文通篇时态为一般过去时，所以这里动词需用过去式，故需将work改为worked。

第七处：考查连词。but前的意思是我们分开了，but后的意思是向清洁工挥手告别。前后是并列顺承的关系，而不是转折的关系，所以需将but改为and，and表示顺承关系。

第八处：考查倒装句。该句为as引导的倒装句，这里as作尽管讲，正常语序为as I was tiredly。be动词后需用形容词作表语，所以需将tiredly改为tired。

第九处：考查不定冠词。harmonious是以辅音字母开头的单词，所以需用冠词a，故需将an改为a。

第十处：考查感叹句。How引导的感叹句是修饰形容词或者副词的，what引导的感叹句修饰名词，由句中的名词deed可知，该句需用what引导，故需将How改为What。