Question

【题目】假如你是李越，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to do in building a good relationship between parents and teenagers？”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你参加。请你用英语写一篇100~120个词的发言稿，就以下内容要点，谈谈你的看法。

内容要点：1.影响我们与父母和谐相处的原因；

2.提出建议并说明理由。

注意：发言稿的开头和结尾已给出（不计入词数）。

Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinion on what to do in building a good relationship between parents and teenagers.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinion on what to do in building a good relationship between parents and teenagers.

It’s widely believed that there is a generation gap between us teenagers and our parents, which sometimes makes it difficult for us to communicate with each other and prevents us from building a good relationship.

To my mind, to get on well with our parents, we should keep the following in mind.

Firstly, listen more. Only by listening to what our parents say, can we know what ideas they have in their mind. Secondly, talk more. Needless to say, a good relationship is achieved through constant communication between two parties. We should talk with our parents regularly and let them know what we’re thinking about. Last but not the least, put ourselves in their shoes. If we do well in all the above, I believe we can live in harmony with our parents.

Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是在英语沙龙的一个发言稿，主题为如何和父母和谐相处，本文贴近自己的生活，比较有话说。对于此类文章，要注意一下几点：1、粗略内容要点已经给出，同学们要添加细节和一些情节，并且给出自己的建议；2、注意发言稿的形式，符合发言稿的语气；3、注意单词、词组、句式的运用来给文章增色。

【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类文章的写作，要善于使用不同的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，本文运用了 prevents us from，To my mind，get on well with，keep ...in mind，all the above等短语。同时本文还使用了 Firstly，Secondly，Last but not the least这样的词组来连接文章，使文章条理更加顺畅。学生在写作时也要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，本文也有很多句型值得学习，如It’s widely believed that there is a generation gap between us teenagers and our parents, which sometimes makes it difficult for us to communicate with each other运用了形式主语和非限制定语从句 ，Only by listening to what our parents say, can we know what ideas they have in their mind运用了倒装句，put ourselves in their shoes是一个英语成语，换位思考，为文章增色不少。