Question

从南京“彭宇案”开始，社会就陷入“助人恐惧”中，最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何？你认为怎样才能让爱心回归社会，建立人与人之间的信任？请根据讨论结果，以“Should We Help Strangers?” 为题写一篇短文

	原因
赞成	帮助他人是美德……； 帮助他人就是帮助自己……； ……
反对	怕陷入麻烦，甚至危险； 怕被误解； ……
你的观点？(至少两点)

注意： 1.词数150左右；                 2.开头已写好，不计入总词数；

3.覆盖所有要点，适当发挥；       4.文稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。     

参考词汇： 美德  virtue

Should  We  Help  Strangers?

We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers. But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of helping strangers. Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

Should We Help Strangers?

We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers. But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of helping strangers. Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Opinions are divided on this topic.

Some think we should try to help others whether they are strangers or not. Helping others is a virtue, and it will make our society more harmonious. Besides, to some extent, helping others is helping oneself. We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day. If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we are strangers to them, it’s hard to imagine what our world will be like.

However, others are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble or even put us in danger. Sometimes we are just misunderstood and thus have to pay the cost of kindness.

In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also protect ourselves to avoid getting into trouble. Only if everyone tries a little kindness, will society be full of love and trust be established between people.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇对比观点的文章， 这种文章应该首先叙述讨论的事件，也就是背景，然后论述两个不同的观点并给出自己的看法。按照提示信息本篇书面表达应该分为三个方面，即：支持的观点；反对的观点和自己的观点。可能用到的句型Some people say ……；While others think that ……；From my point of view, I think……。在列举赞同或者反对的理由时要注意使用恰当的连接词，比如on the one hand ；on the other hand；what’s more；moreover；firstly；secondly 等以使文章层次清晰，有较强的逻辑性。此外，要注意规范拼写和标点也是语言准确性的一个方面。在遣词造句上，应多使用一些高级词汇和高级句型，如定语从句、倒装结构、非谓语动词等以提高文章档次。

【亮点说明】本文开头讲述所讨论的事件：我们是否要帮助陌生人，然后分三段分别讲述赞同的观点，反对的观点和自己的观点。在讲述这三个要点时作者分别用Opinions are divided on this topic，however和 in my opinion来承接上下文，使文章过渡自然，结构分明，脉络清晰。作者在本文中也应用了较多的句型结构和高级词汇，比如be cautious of、harmonious、appeal for、establish、倒装句Only if everyone tries a little kindness, will society be full of love and trust be established between people，状语从句If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we are strangers to them等，这些都显示了作者深厚的语言功底，总之，这是一篇比较优秀的范文。

考点：考查提纲作文。