Question

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Zhang Xiaowen, who is sixteen, a middle school student in Northern China. She

is one of the best student in her class and she was won an award for young scientists last year. When seating in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates and after class her life is obvious different. She was born without the ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dressed and going to the school. So far she has created many programmes and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.

 

Answer 1

1. A之前加is

2.student改为students

3.去掉won之前的was

4.seating改为seated

5.and改为but

6.obvious 改为obviously

7.had改为has

8.long改为longer

9.去掉the

10.which 改为them

【解析】

试题分析：

1.

2. of后接可数名词的复数形式。

3.“她”和“赢得”之间是主动关系，故用主动语态，所以去掉won之前的was。

4. seated是固定用法，这里省略be seated 中的be。

5. 句意：坐在教室里时，她看起来和其他同学一样，但是下课之后，她的生活明显地不同。所以and改为but。

6.

7.

8. little修饰比较级 。

9. to school是固定用法，意思是去上学。

10.这里是and连接的并列句，而不是从句，所以which 改为them。

考点：考查短文改错