Question

假定你是李华，得知你的好友王平现在高三学习非常紧张；父母期望高, 作业繁重，测试多，高考压力大等，他非常烦恼。请给他写一封信，给出你的建议，帮助他摆脱烦恼。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

字数要求：100词左右。

Dear Wang Ping,

I've learned that you are having much trouble in your life and study.

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     Looking forward to your reply!

     Yours,

      Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Wang Ping,

I've learned that you're having much trouble in your life and study, which seriously affect your physical and mental well-being. I'm worried about that, so I'm writing to share with you some of my ideas.

First of all, it is good having heart to heart talks with your parents regularly, telling them you know the high expectations from them and you won’t fail them. Meanwhile, you had better tell them not to push you too hard, which will lead to too much anxiety. Besides, it is advisable to spare some time to take some exercise to keep refreshed and energetic. However, what’s the most important is that you should always keep optimistic and confident. Please take my advice into consideration. 

【解析】

试题分析：此作文题目是一篇应用文，给好友写一封信。信的主要内容是为对方提出建议，即如何面对高三的一系列问题，作业繁重，父母期望高，考试多，压力大等，去帮助对方克服这些困难。在审题过程中要注意内容之间要衔接。另外，要有意识的使用较复杂的句型结构，句识，以及高级词汇等。

【亮点说明】范文中使用了较多的复杂句型结构，例如非限制性定语从句，I've learned that you're having much trouble in your life and study, which seriously affect your physical and mental well-being you had better tell them not to push you too hard, which will lead to too much anxiety。 it is 句型，it is good having heart to heart talks with your parents regularly, telling them you know the high expectations from them and you won’t fail them。主语从句，表语从句等what’s the most important is that you should always。其次这篇文章结构紧凑，first of all meanwhile besides等词的使用，使文章之间层次很清晰。

考点: 考查学生语言的综合运用能力