Question

暑假到了, 你在不忘课本、完成暑假作业的同时, 是否还安排了一些有意义的事情呢?下面就是一个很好的建议, 不妨按照自己的兴趣选择做一点吧。

请根据以下提示完成一篇英语短文。

建议	理由和好处
读古典文学	1. 提高个人修养 2. ……
听优美音乐	1. 缓解学习压力 2. ……
看大师画展	1. 培养美感 2. ……

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。

2. 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好, 不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

参考词汇：有修养的cultured

Summer vocation is coming near. Aside from a lot of homework, I think it necessary to plan some meaningful things. My suggestions are as follows.

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I hope every one of us will lead a productive life in the approaching summer holidays.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Summer vocation is coming near. A side from a lot of homework, I think it necessary to plan some meaningful things. My suggestions are as follows.

First, I recommend reading classic literature, because classics are the antiques of the literary world. They are examples of great writing and wisdom. By reading classics. we can not only appreciate great writers’ works but also make ourselves cultured. At he same time, our ability of reading and writing can be improved.

Music is another thing we should remember to do. As students, listening to music can relax ourselves from the pressure of learning. In some ways, music is good for our health. Sometimes, when we feel tired, we can listen to music. Then we will feel very comfortable. And when we feel sad, we can also listen to music, which can give us a lot of happiness.

If you are interested in art, I suggest you go to some art exhibitions, especially those of masters. Don’t think they have nothing to do with you and your study. As far as I am concerned, art is good for us. By appreciating art works, we can develop our sense of beauty and become more imaginative and creative, which are inevitably beneficial to our study.

I hope every one of us will lead a productive life in the approaching summer holidays.

【解析】

本文是篇表格作文。表格作文是利用表格形式，提供作文素材，其提供的文字素材一般较为简洁，但写作文时要用上，表格作文的体裁不定，可以是书信、日记、描述文、便条等。

这类写作题, 考生应注意以下几点： 

1. 切忌写成“填表题”。

虽以表格作为提示, 但一定要用短文的形式来表达。

2. 切忌“一对一直译”。

表格中的汉语提示有些概括性强、比较简洁,有些较为抽象、复杂, 所以表达时切忌逐字逐句机械地直译、硬译。要灵活调整信息、适当补充成分、采用意译法等写出符合英语表达习惯的文章。

3. 巧妙组合信息。

要善于根据表格上下、左右的关系整合要点。表格左右若是因果关系, 就可以考虑用for, because, therefore等来组合信息。

4. 避免句式单一。

表格里某一栏或列的内容一般用来表达同类信息, 如建议、方法等。为了避免句式重复、单调、呆板, 我们要学会用不同的表达方式表达同类的信息。