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2．上星期，你们班召开了以"My Chinese Dream"为主题的班会活动，每位同学都谈了他们自己对中国梦的理解．请写一篇日记，叙述班会情况及自己的感受．
内容要点如下：1．同学们谈到中国梦纷纷表示大受鼓舞；2．你谈到了自己的梦想；=3．如何实现自己的梦想．
要求：词数100字左右；
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Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Inspired by President Xi's Chinese Dream，everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream．
被席总统的中国梦所鼓舞，每个人都在谈论他所理解的中国梦．
高分句型二：
I want to be a doctor when I grow up because doctors not only can save people's lives but also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge．
我想成为一名医生，当我长大了，因为医生不仅可以挽救人们的生命，也用他们的专业知识帮助人们过上更好的生活．

解答 Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream．Inspired by President Xi's Chinese Dream，everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream（高分句型一）．
As middle school students，we should have a Chinese Dream．Our country is becoming stronger and stronger，we are all proud of it．And we all believe this dream will come true in the future．I want to be a doctor when I grow up because doctors not only can save people's lives but also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge（高分句型二）．
To realize my dream，I must try to study/work hard from now on．I should often do sports to keep healthy．I should obey the school rules and take part in all kinds of meaningful activities．I hope my dream will come true，too．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．