Question

4．请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
Failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability．
注意：
①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
What impressed me most is that failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability．
给我印象最深的是，失败是因为努力而不是缺乏能力缺乏．
高分句型二：
Only when we have a good knowledge of it can we succeed in our life．
只有当我们有我们可以在我们的生活中取得成功的一个很好的知识．

解答 Years of school life has taught me a lot of things．What impressed me most is that failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability（高分句型一）．
When it comes to that，memories flood into my mind．I can still well remember it was a time when I was in senior 1．Every one of my class said I was smart and clever，and I fancied myself too．But to my great disappointment，I failed in a very important test．Seeing through my puzzle，my head teacher said to me，"failure comes from lack of efforts rather than lack of ability．"It was his words that woke me up．So I spared no efforts to study and made great progress in the end．
From my own experience，I can draw a conclusion that we fail because we don't try our best rather than we are not intelligent．Only when we have a good knowledge of it can we succeed in our life（高分句型二）．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．