Question

19．请先阅读下面的电子邮件
Dear Li Hua，
I feel very happy to read your e-mail and I really appreciate your English．Congratulations to you．Your English has really improved a lot．
Oh，I have some good news to tell you．I've got a good chance to practice my Chinese as an exchange student to China．So，here I'd like to ask you for help-which school is the best one for me to attend in China．Tell me，and then I can tell my school to make contact with it．
Looking forward to your early reply and hope to meet you in China soon．
Yours friendly，
Mary
假设你是李华，请你根据下列要点，用英文给玛丽回一封电子邮件，建议她来你所在的学校．理由是：
你校每年都接纳交换生；
学校条件好，各种设施好，有图书馆，电子阅览室…；
课外活动丰富多彩；
你校学生英语水平好，易于交流；
特别是老师好，教法生动有趣．
注意：可根据要求加以必要发挥，但不要逐字翻译；词数为120左右；开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数），但不得抄入答题卡．
参考词汇：设施：facility 电子阅览室：electro-reading-room
Hi Mary，
Nice to read your e-mail today．It's very kind of you to give me encouragement，I owe a lot to you for your help．
As to which school is the best one for you to stay in，I should recommend．
              ．
Isn't the information above enough for you to make a decision？If you come to myschool，I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers．Hope you'll like my school．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封电子邮件．建议作为交换生的玛丽来自己所在的学校学习并阐述理由．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．开头-引出下文； 2．原因；3．结尾-总结．
重要短语：owe sth to sb （欠某人某物），as to（关于），first-class facilities（一流的设施），be accessible to（可得到的），broaden one's views（扩大某人的视野），get fun （获得乐趣），varieties of（各种各样的），provide sb with sth（给某人提供某物），have any difficulty in（有困难做某事），communicate with（与…交流），serve as （作为，充当）．
【高分句型一】
1．we have first-class facilities：the labs，modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students，①offering us places to broaden our views②while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends．
①此处是现在分词短语"offering us places…"作伴随状语，主句为"we have first-class facilities：the labs，modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students"．
      ②此处"while …"引导的从句表对比，主句为"we surely can get much fun and make many friends"．
【高分句型二】
 2．After class we have varieties of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句，先行词为"varieties of activities"，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语．
【高分句型三】
3．And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates．
此处是由连词"that"引导的表语从句，主语为"the most important"，谓语动词为"is"．

解答 Hi Mary，
Nice to read your e-mail today．It's very kind of you to give me encouragement，I owe a lot to you for your help．（开头-引出下文）
As to which school is the best one for you to stay in，I should recommend my school．The following are the reasons．（原因）First，exchange students are welcomed in my school；（每年都接纳交换生） besides，we have first-class facilities：the labs，modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students，offering us places to broaden our views while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends．【高分句型一】（学校条件好，各种设施好，有图书馆，电子阅览室）After class we have varieties of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves．【高分句型二】
（课外活动丰富多彩）And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates．【高分句型三】The teachers are kind and ready to offer help．In their unique ways of teaching，they often make their classes lively and interesting．（特别是老师好，教法生动有趣）We students are encouraged to speak English both in and out of class，thus I do believe that you won't have any difficulty in communicating with us．（你校学生英语水平好，易于交流）
Isn't the information above enough for you to make a decision？If you come to my school，I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers．（结尾-总结）
Hope you'll like my school．
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．