Question

【题目】假如你是李华, 你的澳大利亚笔友Sally三月底将来青岛某中学教英语。她想提前了解青岛的天气、饮食习惯以及高中生英语学习的情况。请用英语给她写一封邮件，介绍以上情况。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sally,

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sally，

I hope you are well. In your letter, you asked me something about Qingdao, which is my hometown.

Qingdao is a beautiful city, located in east of China and faces Huanghai River. Because of approaching the sea, the climate here is mild, that’s to say, it is neither too cold in winter and nor too hot in summer. Generally speaking, the people here like eating rice and seafood and drinking beer, which is known to the world.

At the senior school, we all pay attention to learning English, because we realize that English is becoming more and more important. We can listen to English news and talk to our oral English teacher, who comes from the USA, and we also have limited time to read English books and so on.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes!

Yours，

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

【亮点说明】本篇文章要点齐全，层次分明。文章使用了多种句型，如定语从句：Generally speaking, the people here like eating rice and seafood and drinking beer, which is known to the world.等；再如名词性从句：I hope you are well。以及非谓语动词的使用：Qingdao is a beautiful city, located in east of China and faces Huanghai River.句中还使用了很多短语，如：generally speaking、that is to say、pay attention to等等。