Question

【题目】书面表达

随着互联网的发展和流行，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了。某英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论中学生网上购物的问题。请结合实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件，谈谈你对中学生网购的看法。

1．网上购物的好处(比如方便快捷，节省时间，价格低等)。

2．网上购物的缺点(比如快递比较耗时，无法试穿试用，质量得不到保证等)。

3．中学生对网购应该持什么样的态度。

注意：

1．词数100左右，开头结尾已为你写好；

2．网购的好处与缺点至少各两点；

3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

4．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

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Yours sincerely,

Mike

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become more and more common in China. I'm writing to share my views about online shopping.

On the one hand, I believe it's convenient and economical. With the help of online shopping, we can buy things we want at home with a click of the mouse instead of going to the shopping mall. Besides, we might save money by comparing the price of goods sold in different online shops.

On the other hand, it might lead to many problems. For one thing, your package can't always reach you on time due to various unexpected reasons. For another, you can't try on the clothes to see if they fit you or not like you do when shopping in a real shop.

All in all, I hold that high school students should have a cautious attitude towards online shopping in order to avoid wasting money or buying things of poor quality.

Yours sincerely,

Mike

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容完成这篇关于网上购物的文章。写作中要包含网购的优缺点至少两方面，表达出人们的观点。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语：With the help of在……的帮助下；lead to导致；due to由于；All in all总之；avoid doing避免做某事；With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become more and more common in China这个句子运用到形容词的比较级；All in all, I hold that high school students should have a cautious attitude towards online shopping in order to avoid wasting money or buying things of poor quality这个句子运用到宾语从句；