Question

14．Mrs Smith heard her new neighbor would come and moved into his new house，but she hadn't seen him．One day when she came back，she saw a man wear a brown hat and dark glasses carrying a ladder on his shoulder．The man put the ladder against the window of the new house and went up to break in the window．Mrs Smith said to himself，"Thief，it is a thief．"She rang up the police immediate and soon two policemen appeared in the front of the house．When the man was told to hand in everything what he had stolen，he looked greatly surprising．It was then he understood the reason why the policemen came．He said in a smile on his face，"I can't find my key．It's my new house．"

Answer 1

分析 史密斯夫人听说新邻居要来了，但还没看过．一天她回家时，看到一个人爬窗户，于是打电话给警察说有小偷．警察来要这个人交出偷的东西时，这个人笑着说："我钥匙找不到，这是我的新家．"

解答 Mrs Smith heard her new neighbor would come and moved into his new house，but she hadn't seen him．One day when she came back，she saw a man wear a brown hat and dark glasses carrying a ladder on his shoulder．The man put the ladder against the window of the new house and went up to break in the window．Mrs Smith said to himself，"Thief，it is a thief．"She rang up the police immediate and soon two policemen appeared in the front of the house．When the man was told to hand in everything what he had stolen，he looked greatly surprising．It was then∧he understood the reason why the policemen came．He said in a smile on his face，"I can't find my key．It's my new house．"
详解：
1．moved改为move；动词错误．句中move和come作并列谓语，位于情态动词would后，要用动词原形．          
2．wear改为wearing；分词错误．句中wear作man的后置定语，要用非谓语动词；wear与man之间构成主谓关系，要用表示主动的现在分词．         
3．in改为into；短语搭配错误．break into打碎，闯入．     
4．himself改为herself；逻辑指代错误．句意指代的是Mrs Smith，表示女性，要用herself来指代． 
5．immediate改为immediately；副词错误．句中immediate修饰的是谓语动词rang up，要用副词形式．  
6．去掉the；短语搭配错误．in the front of表示内部的前面；in front of表示外部的前面．   
7．what改为that；连词错误．句中he had stolen作everything的后置短语，是一个定语从句；从句缺少宾语，且先行词everything是不定代词，要用that来引导．
8．surprising改为surprised；形容词错误．句中surprising作系动词look的表语，且表示主语he的感受，要用过去分词构成的形容词．      
9．加that；句型搭配错误．it was…that…强调句型，对he understood the reason why the policemen came then中的时间状语then进行强调．           
10．in改为with；介词错误．句意表达的是伴随状态，要用with短语作伴随状语．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．