Question

作文（共25分）
下面描绘的是醉酒驾车的违章行为，请你根据这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。要求:
1.简要描述图片的内容, 但不能用引语。
2.分析醉酒驾车的原因及其危害并提出措施。
3.发表你的看法。
参考词汇： drunk driving 醉驾
注意：词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

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Answer 1

This is a picture which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country. In the picture, a drunken driver is caught speeding. He has drunk so much that he can’t walk normally
It is well known that drunk driving has been the leading cause of road accidents. What are the reasons for the phenomenon? The lack of safety awareness is the direct reason. Besides, some people believe that drinking a little does no harm to their driving. Drunk driving is a great danger both to our society and to drivers. It’s time we took some measures to make a total ban on drinking. Firstly, we should reinforce the traffic security education to raise people’s awareness towards safety. Secondly, the government should make stricter laws about it and punish drunk drivers severely. Thirdly, we can make posters and signs warning people not to drive after drinking.
In my opinion, people should build up self conscience and pay enough attention to their daily driving. If we can keep on doing this, the road accidents will decrease soon in the future.

试题分析：这是一篇看图说话类作文，首先必须看懂漫画的内容，描绘的是醉酒驾车的违章行为，所以要用第三人称来写。然后再仔细分析题目的要求:1.简要描述图片的内容, 但不能用引语。 2.分析醉酒驾车的原因及其危害并提出措施。 3.发表你的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数词数120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
点评：本文属于看图说话类，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。