Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；、

2. 只允许修改10处.多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When we play football on our school's football field, we have got be very careful. That’s because of there is an ancient tree growing in a middle of it. Our school is surround by many historical building. When we decided to turn the only available space into a football field, we find the tree had to be removed. We asked for permission to have it removed anywhere else, and it was too risky because the tree is considered as a national treasure. Final, we decided to build the field around it. I consider the tree as a great symbol of our school.

Answer 1

【答案】1. be前加to

2. 去掉of

3. a改为the

4. surround改为surrounded

5. building 改为buildings

6. find 改为found

7. anywhere改为somewhere

8. and改为but

9. Final 改为Finally

10. I改为We

【解析】1.句意：我们已经变得很细心。此处是动词不定式做表语，故在be前加to。

2.句意：那是因为有一个古老的树生长在中间。此处是表语从句，故去掉of。

3.固定词组：in the middle of在---中间，故把a改为the。

4.句意：我们的学校被很多历史建筑包围着。此处是一般现在时态的被动语态，故把surround改为surrounded。

5. many修饰可数名词复数，故把building 改为buildings。

6. 句意：当我们决定把唯一的可用空间变成一个足球场时，我们发现树必须被移走。根据句意可知句子用一般过去时态，故把find 改为found。

7. 句意：我们征求许可把树移到其他某个地方。故把anywhere改为somewhere。

8．句意：我们征求许可把树移到其他某个地方，但是这太冒险了，因为这棵树被认为是国宝。前后是转折关系，故把and改为but。

9.副词修饰整个句子，故把Final 改为Finally。

10.句意：我们把树当做我们学校的象征。故把I改为We。