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3．假如你是李晨，你看到美国学生Tom在网上发帖，找人帮他提高汉语水平，请根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件．
1．乐意帮助；
2．胜任理由；
3．学习要求；
4．联系方式（email地址：lichen@163．com）．
注意：1．词数100左右．
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I learned from your post that you want to improve your Chinese level．我从你网上发的帖子上得知你想提高你的汉语水平．
高分句型二：
Learning Chinese takes time．学习汉语是要花费时间的．
句型一 you want to improve your Chinese level．该句是一个由that引导的同位语从句，同位的名词为post，同位语从句是用一个句子对某个抽象名词进行解释说明
句型二 Learning Chinese takes time．该句的主语为动名词短语充当，动名词短语作主语应注意谓语使用单数
此外，该文章还有以下高级词汇和重要短语：learn from sb 收到某人的来信  be fit for 适合．．

解答 Dear Tom，
   This is Li Chen．I learned from your post that you want to improve your Chinese level．（高分句型一）I'm quite interested in it，and I think I'm fit for it．I am a Chinese and I have been learning Chinese as a subject for many years．I'm outgoing，friendly and it's easy to get along well with me．（自我情况介绍）
   Learning Chinese takes time．（高分句型二）So if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practising it every day．Besides，you can also read some books in Chinese，watch some Chinese movies or TV programs．（提出建议）
   Please contact me at lichen@163．com．
   Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Chen

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．