Question

【题目】根据最新颁布的《关于加强和改进普通高中学生综合素质评价的意见》，你校举办校园之星（Star of the Campus）评选活动，你班李华获此殊荣。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍李华的综合素质情况。

要求：1. 短文内容应包括综合素质的五个方面，但不得逐字翻译；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；

3. 词数120左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Being an excellent student with all-round development, Li Hua has been honored as Star of the Campus.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Being an excellent student with all-round development, Li Hua has been honored as Star of the Campus.

He spends most of his spare time doing volunteer work at weekends, helping the old or the disabled, which shows his character of responsibility and kindness. With great intelligence, diligence, good learning methods and positive attitudes, he studies well in all the subjects and often ranks among the top three in the class. After class, he is active in the playground, music clubs and some communities. The sport he likes most is playing basketball and he has served as leader of our school basketball team for two years. He also takes great delight in Chinese opera as well as singing pop songs. Besides, he takes an active part in all sorts of social practices.

In a word, Li Hua is an outstanding student, who has set a good example for us. （131words）

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，根据最新颁布的《关于加强和改进普通高中学生综合素质评价的意见》，你校举办校园之星（Star of the Campus）评选活动，你班李华获此殊荣，介绍李华的综合素质情况。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。词数120左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。作文打分重点关注文体，篇章结构，语言表达的连贯性和地道性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如： which引导的非限制性定语从句，takes great delight in 、takes an active part in 、set a good example for等都很不错。