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【题目】A senior lawmaker on Thursday warned of increasing mortality of lung cancer caused by air pollution．

Of all cancers， lung cancer mortality rate has increased the fastest in recent years， said lawmaker Yang Wei， director of the National Natural Science Foundation of China and member of the National People's Congress （NPC） Standing Committee．

Yang told a group discussion that recent studies show lung cancer is the top killer for males and the second largest killer for females， partially caused by accumulation of air pollutants．

“We always talked about smoking less to keep healthy， but one of the primary reason is the polluted air，”he told lawmakers discussing a report on the enforcement（实施） of the Law on the Prevention and Control of Atmospheric Pollution．

China has vowed to strengthen air pollution control． Beijing will adopt a special air pollution control plan for the upcoming APEC meetings， featuring temporary closure of factories in the event of a pollution warning．

【写作内容】

1．以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2．以约120词就“十面霾伏”发表看法，内容包括：

（1）你身边有雾霾现象吗？

（2）请阐述雾霾的成因；

（3）你认为如何才能有效地控制雾霾现象？

【写作要求】

1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子。

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】The passage states that air pollution，also called smog，is severe in China，which will cause lung cancer．So the government has decided to take some measures to solve this problem．As a matter of fact，living in a most developed city in China，I can always see smog surrounding us．In particular，in wet climates in southern areas like Guangzhou and Zhuhai，people usually suffer from continuous coughing，difficult breathing and aching eyes resulting from heavier smog．As we can see，varieties of reasons can account for this phenomenon．To start with，when winter comes，the northern cities in China need to provide warming service by fueling energy，which must directly produce a large amount of unclean air into the atmosphere．What’s worse，with the development of private cars，air pollution must be awful result of an enormous number of cars driving on the roads．Last but not least，there are no strict laws or regulations to prevent the air from being polluted． To solve this tough global problem，I think it a duty for every single person to start from little actions．As for the government，I strongly appeal that the government should make some related laws to place restrictions on this issue．When it comes to individuals，I sincerely request that we students persuade our parents out of driving privates cars when not necessary．Only if all human beings act mutually can the problem of air pollution be solved effectively．

【解析】本文是一篇开放性作文，要求先用大约30个词概括所给的短文的主要内容，再用大约120个词就“十面霾伏”发表看法。根据提示的信息可知，文章应从雾霾的成因、控制雾霾的方法等几个方面入手。写作时要充分发挥想象，适当的添加自己的观点，使文章内容丰满，并达到要求的字数。此外，为了提高文章档次，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅。

本篇书面表达格式规范，语言流畅。第一段概括了短文的主要内容；第二段介绍了我国目前的雾霾情况；第三段叙述了雾霾的成因；第四段提出了自己的看法和一些可行性的建议。本文的亮点是运用了复杂的句式如定语从句，被动语态等，提升了文章的档次；as a matter of fact、result from、only+状语等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色。