Question

【题目】假定你是李华，2016年奥林匹克运动会将在巴西里约热内卢（Rio）举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括：

1. 个人情况：年龄、性别、学历；

2. 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人等；

3. 承诺：提供最佳服务。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua. _____________________________________________________

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2016 Summer Olympic Games in Brazil.

I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now. I have a good command of English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely. Besides, I have deep love for sports and I can always get along with others easily, which is especially essential for a volunteer. In addition, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.

I believe I can do a good job for the Games. Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文为应用文中的申请信。申请信要求①说明优势。客观陈述事实经历，避免表达主观见解，让人看后自己去下结论。②不要过分渲染自我。切忌过分夸大自己的能力或表现出过分的自信，尤其不要说出与事实不符的能力或特长来。③表明自己很感兴趣，说明自己的愿望，语气自信而坚定。④请求答复联系。

【亮点说明】本篇习作开篇直接点明写信的目的，使人一目了然。在写作中，以简单句为主，说明自己的实际情况和优点优势。但在词汇选择方面，则恰当地使用了多种高级词汇及短语。例如：have a good command of、have deep love for、in addition、be essential for、be ready to等等。