Question

2013年《韩国时报》题为“假如中日步入战争”的文章说，日本自卫队员是世界上最强武装力量的光荣子孙，这支部队历史上经历过太平洋战争等诸多血战，训练水平和战斗经验远强于中国，而且获益于中国的独生子女政策，现在的解放军士兵大多是“小皇帝”，因此还是自卫队战斗力更强。
请结合自身和周围同学实际，试分析
1. 独生子女政策的利弊
2. 身为独生子女的我们怎样培养自己的独立自主能力
3. 词数120左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The one-child policy has been adopted in China for decades.
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Answer 1

The one-child policy has been adopted in China. And it does benefit not only the society but also individuals.  With a better control of the population, the country has made remarkable achievements in the aspects of economic and social development while the family can focus on the only child and afford better education for him.
However, it still brings about a series of problems. As the center attention of families, the only children are easily spoiled by their parents and grandparents. Therefore, they are often selfish and lacking in independence.
As the only child in my family, I think it’s important for us to cultivate our independence and develop a strong sense of responsibility since we are the future of our country. We can share some housework with our parents and should keep it in mind that it’s better to give than to receive.

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。作文给出了一个话题，关于中国的独生子女问题，给了两个提纲，但是没有具体要点，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。考生要围绕这两个问题，展开叙述，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文出现了一些短语：not only…but also…不但…而且，brings about 产生，a series of problems一系列问题，be lacking in缺乏，.和多变的句式：With a better control of the population, the country has made remarkable achievements in the aspects of economic and social development while the family can focus on the only child and afford better education for him.这句话用while表示转折， As the only child in my family, I think it’s important for us to cultivate our independence and develop a strong sense of responsibility since we are the future of our country. 这句话用了原因状语从句和it做形式主语，We can share some housework with our parents and should keep it in mind that it’s better to give than to receive.这句话用了it做形式宾语。