Question

【题目】假如你是李华，在丹麦访学的一周里，住在Anne家里，现在即将回国。请你给她写一封感谢信，要点如下：

1. 简述你的丹麦之行; 2. 感谢她为你所做的一切; 3. 向她发出邀请。

参考词汇：Denmark 丹麦

注意：1. 适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100 字左右。

Dear Anne,

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

All the best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Anne,

I am writing to tell you how much I have enjoyed the days in Denmark. I really appreciate everything you have done for me.

In the past week, I wouldn’t have enjoyed my stay here without your kind help. The comfortable room, delicious meals, friendly family all made me feel so at home. Moreover, the visits guided by you to all interesting places offered me a once-in-a-life chance to be exposed to such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery.

I will be more than pleased to have the opportunity to repay your kindness by showing you around in China. I am looking forward to it.

All the best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇书信类作文。要求你给丹麦的朋友Anne写一封信，感谢在丹麦期间她对你的照顾。写作要点包括：简述丹麦之行；感谢Anne为你所做的一切；向她发出诚挚的邀请。作文必须涵盖所有的要点，并进行适当的扩充，使作文语意连贯、衔接紧凑。必须使用所给的参考词汇，注意字数要求，使用and/but/or/so等连接前后句子和上下文。多使用高级词汇和重要句型。另外，注意书信的格式。

亮点说明：

书信开始以“I am writing to tell you how much...”表明写信的目的；

语法和句型方面：省略that的定语从句you have done for me；虚拟语气I wouldn’t have enjoyed my stay here without your kind help；过去分词短语作定语guided by you；不定式作定语to be exposed to；句型I will be more than pleased to...和I am looking forward to it.等，显示了较扎实的语法基础，提高了作文的层次；

高级词汇：appreciate感激；unique独一无二的；opportunity机会；repay报答；be exposed to等；

连接词方面：In the past week, Moreover等的使用，使句与句之间的衔接更加紧凑；

固定短语：feel at home宾至如归；as well as也；more than不仅仅；show sb around带某人四处参观。