Question

假设你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。

要点：1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象；

2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述；

3. 对他（李华）表示美好的的祝愿。

 

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Yours, Wang Ping

 

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,

It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need.

Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.

I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!

Yours,

Wang Ping

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为提纲类作文。写作内容贴近学生生活，且实用性较强。由于文章内容涉及到“李华在你心中的形象”（现在的一般情况），用事例说明（过去事件），对他的祝愿（祝愿将来），故要注意时态的准确使用。

亮点说明：该篇范文采用三段式，条理清晰地全面表达了要点。全文用词准确，时态使用正确。此外，作者对于定语从句,例如：It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. 和强调句式it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital.的运用准确无误、恰到好处，使得文章句式多变，值得称道！