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【题目】2022年北京--张家口冬奥会将在北京和张家口举行，为了确保冬奥会圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是北京某中学学生王倩，希望能成为一名志愿者。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容如下：

基本情况	年龄、性别、学历
个人条件	英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况
我的承诺	提供最佳服务

注意： 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Wang Qian. __________________________________________________

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Yours faithfully,

Wang Qian

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Wang Qian. I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games. I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing, where the Games will be held. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What’s more, I have other virtues--I’m especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help others. I am willing to provide the best service for every athlete in the Winter Olympic Games. Therefore, I think I’m suitable for serving the Games.

I will appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.

Yours faithfully,

Wang Qian

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇申请信，你是北京某中学学生王倩，希望能成为一名志愿者。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。认真阅读提示，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇书信，格式正确，要点齐全，文中使用高级词汇和句子。I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing, where the Games will be held. My spoken English is good句中ｗｈｅｒｅ引导定语从句；I think I’m suitable for serving the Games.使用宾语从句；I will appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.ｉｔ的特殊用法；另外，What’s more, familiar with，Therefore,等的运用为文章增色添彩。