Question

读图并请根据你对这幅图片的理解，结合写作要求用英语写一篇词数不少于120词的短文。
写作要求：
1．简要描述图片（如：内容、寓意）；
2．帮助他人的原因、好处：
3．你自己将如何帮助他人。
注意：
可参照图片里的文字以及文章的开头提示
做必要的发挥想象；
2．开头已写好，不计入总词数；
3．作文中不得提及有关考生的真实信息。
Whether to help others is an issue concerning everyone. Some people_______________________
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Answer 1

Whether to help others is an issue concerning everyone. Some people hold the view that helping others will cause trouble to us unexpectedly, while others think it a traditional virtue to aid others.
As is vividly shown in the picture, roses given, fragrance in hand, which means helping others is beneficial both to others and ourselves. It's a pity that people are becoming more and more indifferent to each other. We should help others because everyone needs help no matter what he does. If we lend a helping hand to others, we will be offered help when we have difficulty. What's more, we will feel happy because of our kindness. That's to say, helping others is helping us and we can take pleasure in offering help, which contributes to building a harmonious society.
Therefore, don't hesitate to help others. How can we help others? Personally, I'm supposed to be concerned about those who're in trouble. I can work as a volunteer, a donator or even as a good listener. Sometimes a few encouraging words could make a difference.

试题分析：这是一篇开放式作文，也是看图作文，认真读图，可知图画反映了授人玫瑰手有余香的道理，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】. 文章立意准确，语言丰富，运用词组和句型较多：lend a helping hand to 帮助…，That's to say, 也就是说，take pleasure in乐于， hesitate to犹豫， be concerned about关心，in trouble有困难， make a difference. 有影响，Some people hold the view that helping others will cause trouble to us unexpectedly, while others think it a traditional virtue to aid others.这句话用了同位语从句； As is vividly shown in the picture, roses given, fragrance in hand, which means helping others is beneficial both to others and ourselves. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，It's a pity that people are becoming more and more indifferent to each other. 这句话用了固定句型，We should help others because everyone needs help no matter what he does. 这句话用了让步状语从句，还有文章还使用了What's more这样的词，使文章更加连贯。