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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

In a freezing cold day in January 1994,Jiesang Suonandajie found what he was looking for—a group of poacher who were killing the endangered Tibetan antelope.Jiesang knows he had to move quickly.He shouted to the poachers to put away their guns.Although being surprised,the poachers had a advantage there were more of them.In the battle what followed Jiesang was shot and killed.When its frozen body was found hours late,he was still holding his gun. He had given his life save the Tibetan antelope.

Answer 1

【答案】1.In→On

2.poacher→poachers

3.know→knew

4.away→down

5.删除being

6.a→an

7.what→that/which

8.its→his

9.late→later

10.添加to

【解析】1.句意：在1994年1月一个极冷的日子。Day前面有限制词修饰，用介词on。

2. a group of一群，一组，后面用名词复数形式，故把poacher→poachers。

3.本文讲的是过去的事情，句子用一般过去时态，故把knows→knew。

4.句意：他向偷猎者大声喊，让他们放下枪。put away收起来放好put down放下。故把away→down。

5.句意：尽管感到吃惊，但偷猎者有人多的优势。此处是过去分词做状语，故把being去掉。

6. advantage以元音开头，故把a---an。

7.句意：在接下来的斗争中。此处the battle是先行词，指物，在后面的定语从句中做主语，故把what→that/which。

8.句意：数小时后当他的尸体被发现的时候，---。故把its→his。

9.句意：数小时之后。故把 late→later。

10. 句意：为了救藏羚羊他献出了自己的生命。此处是动词不定式做目的状语，故在save前加to。