Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高二（1）班学生李华。你们学校即将举行建校50周年庆典，届时将有外国友人参加。因此，校学生会拟招聘英语主持人。请根据以下信息写一封英文申请信。

性格	热情开朗，有亲和力
能力	发音标准,声音洪亮，临场应变能力强
其他	……

注意：1.词数不少于60。

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：校庆 anniversary

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class 1, Senior Grade 2.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class 1, Senior Grade 2. I’m writing to apply for the position as the host for the 50th anniversary of our school.

I am a healthy and optimistic boy of 178 centimeters in height. Not only am I easygoing and full of passion, but also I am responsible and willing to put efforts to work. Moreover, I believe good teamwork and communication are also my strengths. As to qualifications for this position, I speak in a loud and clear voice. Three years’ learning experiences in America enable me to have good English pronunciation which is highly spoken of by my teachers and classmates. In addition, I am quick in responding to different situations on the stage due to my hosting experience in many parties and activities in our school.

I hope to be the host because I would like to do my bit for our school on such a special occasion. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】校学生会拟招聘英语主持人，本文是一篇申请信，内容如下：热情开朗，有亲和力；发音标准,声音洪亮，临场应变能力强；其他---。根据所给提示并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封申请信，格式正确，采用三段式，内容紧扣主题，文章结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。Not only am I easygoing and full of passion, but also I am responsible and willing to put efforts to work.句子使用部分倒装；As to qualifications for this position, as to的运用巧妙至极；Three years’ learning experiences in America enable me to have good English pronunciation which is highly spoken of by my teachers and classmates. which引导定语从句；另外，Moreover, In addition, due to，looking forward to等的运用为文章增色添彩。