Question

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees.

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

As an old saying goes, failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go. Although failure is annoying, as long as we face it bravely, we will succeed sooner or later.

There was once a time when I had difficulty in math. However hard I tried, my math grade was still bad. Later, I failed to pass an important examination. Before I decided to give up, it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson. What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely. Knowing the importance of failure, I was not afraid of math. Finally, my math grades improved.

Taking my experience into conclusion, everyone can conquer the unavoidable failure in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves. Treasure the failure, and you will win the treasure.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。Failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees.就失败乃成功之母为话题写一篇作文。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go.这里含有两个定语从句；Before I decided to give up, it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson.这里含有一个定语从句和一个强调句。What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely.这里含有一个主语从句。

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