Question

假设你的笔友Tony因上期高三期末数学考试未及格而倍受打击，情绪低落。请你 (王华)写一封信给他，鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。

注意：

????????????? ????????????? 1、词数不少于120个；

????????????? ????????????? 2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam, but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.

As senior three students, we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success. There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks. We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study. As for your anxiety, I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learning energetically and efficiently.

I hope all above can help you a lot. Let’s work hard together and turn our dream into reality.

???????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours，

?????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Wang Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一封书信，但是只给了一个话题，没有具体的内容，属于开放性作文，给出了一个话题：让你写一封信给Tony，鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：as well as 不但…而且…，As for 至于，turn our dream into reality把梦想变成现实， but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.这句话用了主语从句和表语从句， There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks.这句话用了固定句型， We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study. 这句话用了倒装句， I think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learning energetically and efficiently.这句话用了so that引导的结果状语从句。

考点：考查开放式作文