Question

随着智能手机的广泛应用，越来越多的年轻人成为低头族。近日，重庆划设了中国第一条专供手机使用者的人行道。请根据以下内容写一篇报道。

【写作内容】

地点 重庆洋人街景区

基本情况 3米宽，50米长

人行道一分为二；一边划设给手机使用者，另一边则为非手机使用者使用

目的 保障手机使用者的行走安全

看法 一些人赞同：认为人行道的设置是合理的，可避免手机使用者在行走中造成不必要的伤害

一些人反对：认为最好的办法是加强行人的安全教育，改掉手机使用者沉迷手机的不良习惯。

参考词汇：人行道：sidewalk； 洋人街景区：Yangrenjie Scenic Spot

【写作要求】

1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；

2. 首句已给出，不计入总句数。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them.

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Answer 1

With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them. To ensure the safety of phone users on the road, the first “mobile phone sidewalk in China” was built in Yangrenjie Scenic Spot, Chongqing. It is divided into two pathways, one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. As for its appearance, different people hold different opinions. Some people think it reasonable, viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. However, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.

【解析】

试题分析：对于表明观点类文章，注意理由要充分，可以用表观点的联词，如It is divided into two pathways As for its appearance，等等。注意写作内容所给的信息，不可遗漏，可以多进行一些补充，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般现在时。结构上：可采取总分模式。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。

【亮点说明】With the increasing，more and more，To ensure，However等词组使文章更生动；It is divided into two pathways，viewing it as a good solution使文章条理清晰；With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them.使用从句；However, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians使用长难句子既简洁又明了的表达了观点，使文章更有水平。表达对某事的看法时文章的安排分为三部分，开头部分：开门见山地表明观点及论述的内容。正文部分：从正反两面剖析。结尾部分：一句话总结，清晰明了。（表示不同观点归纳的词语：in a word, on the whole, generally speaking,as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion）

考点：考查对观点类作文的写作