Question

【题目】假如你是高三(1)班李华，你们班要举办一个联欢会(party), 请给外教Mike写一封E-mail邀请他来参加，并通知以下事宜：

1.举办时间：下周五下午6:00—8:30；

2.有游戏环节,建议Mike穿休闲装；

3.希望Mike准备一首英文歌曲表演。

注意：1词数：100左右。

2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

We’re very glad that you have accepted our invitation to the party. I would like to offer our warm welcome to you and inform you of something that you need to know.

According to the plan, the party will begin at 6 pm next Friday and end at 8:30 pm. We will sing and play games at the party so I suggest that you wear casual clothes for your convenience. And we hope that you can prepare an English song and give a performance that day. I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time with us. We are looking forward to seeing you next Friday afternoon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封邀请信：班级要举办一个联欢会(party), 要求给外教Mike写一封E-mail邀请他来参加，并通知以下事宜：1.举办时间：下周五下午6:00—8:30；2.有游戏环节,建议Mike穿休闲装；3.希望Mike准备一首英文歌曲表演。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：We’re very glad that you have accepted our invitation to the party. warm welcome, have a pleasant time, looking forward to等。

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句that you have accepted our invitation to the party. that you wear casual clothes for your convenience.和that you can prepare an English song and give a performance that day.定语从句that you need to know.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。