Question

16．假定你是李华，请根据下面内容提示写一则通知，告知学生们有关下周五上午9：00史密斯教授来校做演讲的情况．

地点	学校餐厅
演讲人	来自河北师大（Hebei Normal University）的史密斯教授
主题	多元的美国文化（The diversity of American culture）
要求	与本班班长联系，填写个人信息表格，按时参加

注意：1．词数100左右．文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
2．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
Attention，fellow students．
There's something important I want to tell you．To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）Professor Smith from Hebei Normal University will make a wonderful speech on"The diversity of American culture"．Remember，the speech will be held in the dinning hall next Friday at nine o'clock in the morning．If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）And finally，please get there on time and keep the hall clean．     Thank you！

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分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息写一则通知，告知学生们有关下周五上午9：00史密斯教授来校做演讲的情况，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：地点，演讲人，主题，要求等 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：To have a better understanding of为了更好地理解；make a wonderful speech 做一个精彩的演讲；finally最后
To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）
If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）

解答 Attention，fellow students．There's something important I want to tell you．To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）Professor Smith from Hebei Normal University will make a wonderful speech on"The diversity of American culture"．Remember，the speech will be held in the dinning hall next Friday at nine o'clock in the morning．If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）And finally，please get there on time and keep the hall clean．
Thank you!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．