Question

In my hometown there used to be a temple with a	76．________
history of over eight hundred years. It lies in a	77．________
valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful	78．________
and famous that many tourists came visit it every	79．________
day. They took photo; they wrote down their names on	80．________
the walls, they were brought food and drink and left rubbish	81．________
everywhere. One day some toursts did a fire to cook	82．________
food near the temple. All of sudden, a strong wind	83．________
blew. The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the wholly	84．________
temple was burned out and only a little walls remained.	85．________
The beautiful temple disappeared.

Answer 1

  76．√
  77．lies改为lay本文叙述的是过去的一座庙，因此用过去式。
  78．such改为so beautiful为形容词，应用so 修饰。
  79．came后加to
  80．photo改为photos
  81．去were ，此处非被动。
  82．did改为made生火是make a fire．
  83．of和sudden之间加a．all of a sudden等于suddenly.
  84．wholly改为whole。此处为形容词作定语。
  85．little改为few.此处walls为可数名词应用few修饰。