Question

11．假设你校学生会定于 4 月 10 日组织一次高三学生的登山活动，请根据以下提示，以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知，欢迎同学们积极参加．
1．活动目的；
2．集合时间；
3．活动内容及注意事项．
注意：1．词数 100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3．通知的格式已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Notice
In order to encourage Senior Three students to take exercise and relax themselves，we're going to organize a mountain-climbing activity on April 10．（高分句型一）We're to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m． We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．（高分句型二）In the afternoon we'll be divided into groups and have a free time． Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held later at our school．Besides，take your lunch and drinking water with you．If you want to join，please come to Student Union and sign up before April 5．
Student Union
March 30．

Answer 1

分析 本次作文要求学生会定于4月10日组织一次高三学生的登山活动，以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知，欢迎同学们积极参加．要点包括：目的；地点；内容与要求；温馨提示；写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯．其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力．例如：定语从句on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．被动语态we'll be divided into groups．不定式的被动to be held．In order to，make notes，essay contest等词汇及Besides 等连接词．高分句型：
（一）We're togather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m 用be to do 来表示将来，强调务必要准时集合．
（二）We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of whichwe'll have a picnic at noon．这个句子用介词短语加关系词来引导非限制性定语从句，即on the  top of+which，意思是在山顶上．
（三）Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be heldlater at our school．此处用动词不定式的被动形式来做定语表示将来，非谓语动词运用恰到好处．

解答 Notice
      In order to encourage Senior Three students to take exercise and relax themselves，we're going to organize a mountain-climbing activity on April 10．（高分句型一）We're to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m． We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．（高分句型二）In the afternoon we'll be divided into groups and have a free time． Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held later at our school．Besides，take your lunch and drinking water with you．If you want to join，please come to Student Union and sign up before April 5．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Student Union
                                                                                                                                                                                                           March 30

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．