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    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

    The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!.

     

    【答案】

     

     while改为when

     bicycle改为bicycles

     Dressing改为Dressed

     去掉was

     total改为totally

     drop后面加a

     he改为she

     out改为up

     but改为and

     How改为What

    【解析】

    试题分析：短文改错考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。

     while改为when      连词while后面不能接短暂性动词，一定要接延续性动词。When后面既可以接短暂性动词也可以接延续性动词。

     bicycle改为bicycles  前面有those修饰，说明使用复数形式bicycles。

     Dressing改为Dressed   固定搭配be dressed in….穿着…；本句中使用形容词短语dressed in…对句子的主语he的情况进行说明。

     去掉was           系动词sound是没有被动语态的形式，固定搭配sound like听起来像….；

     total改为totally     使用副词totally做状语修饰形容词crazy，形容词total是不能修饰形容词的。

     drop后面加a    本句后的名词bill纸币，是一个可数名词。本句是指一张20美元的纸币。

     he改为she   前面提及了a lady，这是一位女性。故使用she，而不是he。

     out改为up   动词短语pick up捡起来，pick out挑选出；一个穿红色衣服的人捡起这张钱给了她。

     but改为and    上下文之间存在着顺接的关系。句义：之后，他骑上车很快就消失了。

     How改为What  本句是一个感叹句，后面是一个名词短语a strange and good guy!故使用what进行感叹。How通常用来感叹形容词或者副词。

    考点：考察短文改错

     

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