Question

分析下面的书面表达，指出其中的错误．

　　目前中学生出国学习的现象非常火爆，很多家长也为此不惜代价；请你谈谈你对这种现象的看法，是先上完高中打好基础再出国好，还是趁早出去好．

　　At present, in order to let their children receive better education, some parents send their children abroad to study. This results in that (1) more and more students want to go to (2) abroad to study without finishing their study in the middle school. In my own (3) opinion, I think it is not necessary to go abroad so early.

　　First, the education system and teaching methods are different with (4) ours. I doubt whether you can learn normally abroad. Besides, the cost is very expensive (5) in foreign countries. Since you can not earn enough money by yourself, you have to ask your parents for money. On the other hand, your (6) knowledge is limited for you haven't finished middle school yet. It is not worth spending so much money to study abroad.

　　I suggested (7) to students that they finish middle school and then go to university in their own country. After graduation, you (8) can go abroad to make a further study. That will be much better.

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解题思路：(1)This results in that改为“As a result，”．因为 results后面的in为介词，一般介词后面不能接that引导的从句． 　　(2)由于abroad为副词，它前面的to为介词，而介词后面应接名词、代词，因此，to应去掉． 　　(3)own应改为 personal．In one's personal opinion为一个固定习语． 　　(4)with应改为 from．be different from为一个固定搭配． 　　(5)expensive应改为high，因为“价值、价格”应该与“高(high)、低(low)”搭配．我们可以说Something is expensive/cheap． 　　(6)your改为our．因为考生本人也是学生．只有这样才符合逻辑． 　　(7)根据短文的整体时态，suggested应必为suggest． 　　(8)根据短文中的最后一段里的I suggest to students that…，从而可以推出 you应改为 she or he才符合逻辑．