Question

【题目】假定你是李华，暑假就要来了，你打算参加学校组织的国际游学（Study Tour）活动，目的地是California。请给美国朋友Peter写封信表达你游学的目的，并希望得到他的建议。要点如下：

1.开拓国际视野；

2.体验不同教育；

3.提高语言能力。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I plan to attend the Global Study Tour organized by our school in the coming summer vacation.

The biggest reason why I consider Study Tour is the opportunity to see the world. I will have a better understanding and appreciation for the nation’s people and history. Another reason is for the chance to experience different styles of education. By enrolling in it, I will have the chance to see what I may not have been exposed to at home. In addition, I think it is also the opportunity to improve my spoken English.

I’d appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文的写作内容包括1．简略描述国际游学这项活动2．共享单车的优点有哪些3．提出文章所列出提纲之外的优点，要求学生有所发挥并加以描述。在写作当中应使用连接词，适当添加题目要求以外的内容，使作文内容连贯鲜活起来。

亮点说明：范文中运用一些高级句式如The biggest reason why．．．;ｂｅ　ｅｘｐｏｓｅｄ　ｔｏ;等；同时该文章逻辑合理，有理有据，行文流畅，长短句结合。这些技巧无疑使内容或者结构都更加丰富，多样。