Question

1．假定你是李华，你的外教 James 明天下午要做一个关于"互联网+"的讲座，你因故不能参加，请根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件．
1．表达歉意；
2．解释原因；
3．询问是否有讲座的相关资料．
注意：
1．可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
2．词数100词左右，信的抬头和落款已给出（不计入词数）．
3．参考词汇：互联网+Internet Plus
Dear James，
                                                   
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封电子邮件．写作要点为：1．表达歉意；2．解释原因；3．询问是否有讲座的相关资料．写作时人称以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时．
重点词汇：apologize for （为了…而道歉）；take part in （参加）；accidentally（意外地，偶然地）；or so（大约，左右）；To be frank（说实话，坦率地说）
高分句型：1．The reason ①for my being absent is ②that my right leg is hurt．
                ①介词短语作后置定语；②that引导一个从句，作系动词be的表语．
                2．The doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so．
                suggest作"建议"讲引导从句时，从句用"should+动词原形"，should可以省略．
                3．Wish your lecture a great success．
                 wish接复合宾语表示祝愿．

解答 Dear James，
I am writing to apologize for not being able to attend your lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is on Internet Plus．
The reason for my being absent is that my right leg is hurt（高分句型一）．I took part in a basketball game last week and I hurt my right leg accidentally．The doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so（高分句型二）．To be frank，I am extremely interested in the topic of Internet Plus．Therefore，it is really a pity that I will miss it．I wonder if there are any relevant materials of the lecture．If so，I can learn it myself when it is convenient．
Wish your lecture a great success（高分句型三）．
Yours，

点评 考生在写作提纲类作文时应注意不能漏掉所给出的几个要点，在写作中要选择正确的时态和语态，思路清晰，针对每一要点，可以做出适当补充，以达到有理有据，并注意上下文的衔接．