Question

书面表达（满分25分）
暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期的计划，提出了不同的看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。

	优点	缺点
待在家中	花费少；方便舒适	不能亲身了解外界
外出旅游	增长见识；开阔眼界	花费多；旅途不便；担心安全

 

Answer 1

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Possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purpose. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to got out for traveling, because it can increase their knowledge. Besides, traveling can broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. Above all, no one can be sure of their safety.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework.

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，首先要认真阅读题目。暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期的计划，提出了不同的看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。需要写的内容已经以图表形式给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可，特别要注意在陈述完别人的观点后，一定要谈谈自己的看法。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。