Question

【题目】假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(TheEnglishDramaFestival)。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信,要点如下:

1.介绍活动内容;

2.邀请他表演节目;

3.请他提出活动建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.

A variety of activities will be included in the festival, such as singing, crosstalk and so on. You are expected to put on a performance with us. Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice .

Looking forward to your coming.

Sincerely Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，邀请外教参加英语戏剧节并向他介绍活动内容。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 介绍活动内容（introduction of the English Drama Festival）

2. 邀请参加并邀请他表演节目（invitation to the English Drama Festival）

3. 请他提出活动建议（asking for suggestions）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

the English Drama Festival；hold；invite；participate；advice；look forward to；ask for

第三步：连词成句

1. The English Drama Festival of our school will be hold.

2. I am writing to invite you to participate in it

3. There are plenty of activities in the English Drama Festival.

4. We expect you can give a performance with us.

5. We hope you can give us some valuable suggestions.

6. Look forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改