Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据以下提示要点，写一篇题为“我们的班长”的短文。

1. 她叫李敏，个子高，身体好，很活泼。她各科成绩都好，既喜欢体育活动，又能歌善舞。

2. 她刚进校时，在英语学习上遇到不少困难。但她不怕苦，不怕难，努力把英语学好。

3. 她严于律己，乐于助人，是大家学习的好榜样。

4. 谈谈自己的看法。

参考词汇: 1.班长monitor 2.树立好榜样sets us all a good example.

注意：

1) 介绍需包括所给内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。

2) 字数：100词左右。

3) 书写规范整齐.

Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version

Our Monitor

Li Min is our monitor. She is tall, healthy and lively. She does well in all subjects. She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing. Li Min works hard at English. When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the English language. But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them. She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class. No pains, no gains. With great efforts she made much progress in her English study. Li Min is modest and always ready to help others. She is very strict with herself in her work and daily life. She sets us all a fine example.

I respect our monitor not only because she is good at her studies but also because she has a lot of fine qualities. I’ll learn from her and try to become an excellent student in our class.

【解析】

试题分析：请根据以下提示要点，写一篇题为“我们的班长”的短文。1. 她叫李敏，个子高，身体好，很活泼。她各科成绩都好，既喜欢体育活动，又能歌善舞。2. 她刚进校时，在英语学习上遇到不少困难。但她不怕苦，不怕难，努力把英语学好。3. 她严于律己，乐于助人，是大家学习的好榜样。4. 谈谈自己的看法。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing. 运用固定短语和并列句结合； No pains, no gains. 运用固定俗语；But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them. 运用转折句式；

When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the English language. 运用时间状语从句；I respect our monitor not only because she is good at her studies but also because she has a lot of fine qualities. 此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。