Question

阅读下面的短文(耐心)，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Everyone has an experience they would rather forget Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson Here is a story of mine

　　Last Sunday I went fishing After setting up my fishing rod(钓鱼竿)with bait(钓鱼的饵), I sat down on the bank of the lake But two hours later, I didn’t catch any fish I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff(收拾东西), preparing to go back home

　　Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why“Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?”I asked“About four hours,”he answered“Four hours?”I could believe my ears“Yes It’s very important to be patient,”the old man said“Don’t consider fishing a tiring sport Just enjoy it”Suddenly, I understand what he said I must learn to be patient Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didn’t move and waited for the right moment to reel it in(卷收钓鱼线)At last, I caught it This made me very happy In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish

　　On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience

[写作内容]

1)以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2)然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历，并包括以下要点：

a)叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实或虚构的经历；

b)你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的；

c)耐心对你的生活、学习有什么影响。

[写作要求]

(1)可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

(2)标题自定。

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

Possible version：

　　Patience is the secret of success

　　The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success(39 words)

　　I have a similar experience Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes, no bus came I couldn’t wait any longer and decided to walk to school But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes Only then did I realize the importance of patience Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made Patience also plays an important part in our study and work With it we can achieve greater(110 words)

　　Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, I’ll think of the experience of waiting for a bus(18 words)

(167 words)