Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第l1处起）不计分。

My mother always bought gifts to me for my birthdays. With my fifteen birthday around the corner, she asked me I wanted. For the first time, I realize how lucky I was to have been born in such a fortunate family. I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed. That was because I told my mother that instead of get an expensive gift, I’d love to use the money to help others. At the first , she felt surprised. When she realized I was seriously, she offered me 500 yuan. I bought some toys and went to the orphanage(孤儿院) in our city. I handed out the toys to the child and had a good time with them.

 

Answer 1

1.to 改成for

2.fifteen 改成fifteenth

3.me后面加what

4.realize 改成realized

5.satisfying改成 satisfied

6.because 改成why

7.get 改成getting

8.去掉the

9.seriously改成 serious

10.child 改成children

【解析】

试题分析：作者在生日的时候，总是会收到妈妈的礼物，在14岁生日的时候，作者想到那些需要帮助的人，决定用买礼物的钱帮助那些孤儿院的孩子。

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考点：考查短文改错