Question

假如你叫李华，是某校高三学生。高考在即，看到每天家人和学校为自己做的一切，深有感触。请根据下表提示写一篇短文。

家长	生活上的照顾
学校	提供了方便（延长图书馆和教室的开放时间……）
老师	学习上给予的帮助（鼓励，答疑解难……）
你自己	感受和打算，至少两点

   注意：
1．必须包括主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯、完整；
2．词数：120词左右；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数内。
I’m a senior 3 student.The college entrance exam is on the way                              
                                                                                      
                                                                                       

Answer 1

I’m a senior 3 student. The college entrance exam is on the way and everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different ways. At school, all the teachers work very hard, encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study. Whenever we meet with difficulties, they are ready to come to our help. Meanwhile, our school also provides good facilities for us students, for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends. At home, our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy.
I’m very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers. I’m determined to try my best to prepare for the exam. I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help I’ll be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future.

解析试题分析：本题是提纲类作文写作，文章题材和体裁已经给出，无需考生过多考虑。而考生重点要注意审题，只有做好了审题环节才能保证写作的有效性和目的性。审题主要要做到以下几点：①分清层次和段落，切勿平铺直叙，“一逗到底”。②句式﹑词汇要尽量多样，恰当使用较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇。③文章衔接紧密，过渡自然，恰当使用好连接词或过渡性词汇。④注意书写的整齐、美观，并正确使用标点符号。
【亮点说明】这篇范文使用了高中教材中出现的词汇，短语，语法，句式，如：At school, all the teachers work very hard, encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study.这句话用了现在分词做状语， Whenever we meet with difficulties, they are ready to come to our help. 这句话用了让步状语从句， our school also provides good facilities for us students, for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends. 这句话用了provide sth for sb“提供某人某物”，At home, our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy.这句话用了so that…引导的目的状语从句， I’m very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers. I’m determined to try my best to prepare for the exam. 这两句话都用了不定式，还有范文中还有Meanwhile,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查提纲类作文