Question

【题目】假定你是李华，已申请就读美国南加州大学（University of Southern California)。在申请过程中，得到前美国外教Mr. King的帮助。请你给Mr. King写信，包含以下要点：

1.已被大学录取；

2.感谢他的帮助；

3.期待在美同相见。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. King,

I hope everything is okay with you then. I’m Li Hua, your former student in China. Hopefully you’ve not forgotten me since you helped me a lot last year when I was trying to apply for American universities.

I’m writing to tell you that I have been admitted to University of Southern California and will start my study there next September. I’m really grateful to you for your help, without which it would have been much more difficult for me.

I know my university is close to your home so I wish I could visit you after I get there. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.

Best regards.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】文章是一封感谢信，要求根据李华已申请就读美国南加州大学（University of Southern California)。在申请过程中，得到前美国外教Mr. King的帮助。因此写信表示感谢。要点包括：1.真挚的问候，并说明已被大学录取；2.感谢他的帮助；3.期待在美国相见。

感谢信要注意态度诚恳，语言得体，要点全面。还要注意句式的变化，来增加亮点。比如：宾语从句that I have been admitted to University of Southern California and will start my study there next September.和I could visit you after I get there.定语从句without which it would have been much more difficult for me.词语apply for，looking forward to等。