Question

【题目】假设你是高一某班的一名学生，上星期你们班就“健康和外貌，哪个更重要？”进行辩论。请根据下列提示写一篇作文：

一些学生的观点----外貌更重要	1. 让人更有吸引力，有助于交到更多的朋友
	2. 更有机会找到好工作
另一些学生的观点----健康更重要	1. 健康使人精力充沛，学习工作效率更高
	2. 健康的人很少生病，不会增加家庭负担
你的看法及原因	至少两点

注意：1. 对所给要点要逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 字数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
参考词汇：负担 burden 高效地 efficiently
Last week, our class had a heated discussion about“Which is more important, health or appearance?

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Last week, our class had a heated discussion about“Which is more important, health or appearance?”. Our opinions are divided.

Some of us hold the opinion that appearance is more important than health. As is known to all, good appearance makes a person more attractive, which will help make more friends. Besides, it will be much easier for one to find a good job if he has good appearance, because people usually pay more attention to appearance.

However, others insist that health is more important than appearance. People usually feel energetic if they are healthy. And this will cause them to work and study more efficiently. In addition, people with good health are less likely to suffer illness, adding no extra burden to their family. So it’s of great importance to stay healthy.

As far as I’m concerned, health matters more than appearance in our life. We can’t do anything well without good health. It also does good to our family if we’re all healthy. Only with good health can we work and study better.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，短文必须将“健康和外貌，哪个更重要？”这个主题辩论阐述出来，属于议论文。短文应该主要用一般现在时，可以分成四小段来写，第一段引出主题，第二段从正方来写，第三段从反方写，最后写自己的观点。另外，还应该尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：As is known to all，Besides，However，efficiently，In addition，be likely to，As far as I’m concerned，Only with good health can we work and study better.等都很不错。