Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你将参加今年夏天在你市举办的国际音乐夏令营，该夏令营面向世界各地爱好演奏乐器的学生。请给你的英国朋友Harry写信，邀请他一同参加该夏令营。要点应包括：

1．夏令营的有关介绍；

2．你的邀请；

3．夏令营每天的活动安排：

上午：专家授课

下午：练习乐器数小时

晚上：music exchange concert(学生表演，演奏自己国家的音乐)

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Harry，

I have good news for you.

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Harry，

I have good news for you. There will be an international music camp in our city this summer, which is open to students from all over the world who are interested in playing musical instruments. I know you are a music lover, so why not join the camp together with us?

At the camp, campers are given classes by experts in the morning and in the afternoon they do a couple of hours of practice. In the evening, there is a music exchange concert where campers can give performances and play different kinds of music from their own countries.

I'm sure you will have a lot of fun there. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，邀请英国朋友Harry一同参加夏令营。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1．夏令营的有关介绍；

2．你的邀请；

3．夏令营每天的活动安排：

上午：专家授课

下午：练习乐器数小时

晚上：music exchange concert(学生表演，演奏自己国家的音乐)

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

There will be；why not；a couple of；kinds of；looking forward to

第三步：连词成句

There will be an international music camp in our city this summer, which is open to students from all over the world who are interested in playing musical instruments.

I know you are a music lover, so why not join the camp together with us?

At the camp, campers are given classes by experts in the morning and in the afternoon they do a couple of hours of practice.

In the evening, there is a music exchange concert where campers can give performances and play different kinds of music from their own countries.

I'm sure you will have a lot of fun there. I'm looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改